Monday, January 5, 2009

Danielle's response.

I noticed you took your time to research your topic and write a good amount of information about it. All your information is good information about your topic, I learned a lot about fire fighters from reading your blog. The only thing i would suggest as changing your blog color to green because your five paragraph essay is written in green.

Zach's Response

Caitlyn you did a really good job. You found a lot of information on your topic. I'm glad your having success looking for your info. The only thing that I noticed is that your response notes are suppose to be green because your 5 paragraph essay was green.

Ryan's Response

This blog has informed me a great deal on firefighters. Now I know how much they earn, how many hours they need of training, and so much more. There isn't anything else I could think of you to include. Your being very successful in finding information and I hope you keep finding it. You need to make your responses green though because your five paragraphs are. Other wise it looked fine.

Morgans Response

This is good except the responses need to be green because your 5 paragraph essay is green. Your response titles also need to be the same as the notes title.